It Started With A Heist

It Started With A Heist

49.9K Reads 2K Votes 30 Part Story
Aya ツ By aya_sherif Completed

He's the law, She breaks it.

Emma Lawrence is not your typical girl. She is a professional thief and con artist. So what will happen when she meets Jake Parker, a promising FBI agent. Will he be the end of her or everything she ever wanted?

After all, everything started with a heist.

Highest rank: #310 in Romance

funny716 funny716 Jul 24
I think this is great, just don't add so much background in the beginning, shorten it to get to the main plot, if it's a short story
I think your storyline and English is better than mine and my native language is English.
Skelly-ton Skelly-ton May 08
Usually any grammatical or spelling mistakes really irk me but I am seriously impressed if you're writing a book in your second language, and since it's your first book. Way to gooo
StarrFox317 StarrFox317 Sep 11
I'm impressed for this not being your first langue. It really is great! Amazing, I wouldn't have known if you never said anythingZ
saikounawriter saikounawriter Feb 11, 2016
If stealing a single piece of work makes me gain 4 millions....Why the heck do I bother going to school?
fluffsterkitty fluffsterkitty Jun 01, 2016
Emma has pretty eyes. Well she does if she's the girl from the picture