It Started With A Heist

It Started With A Heist

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Aya ツ By aya_sherif Completed

He's the law, She breaks it.
Emma Lawrence is not your typical girl. She is a professional thief and con artist.
So what will happen when she meets Jake Parker, a promising FBI agent. Will he be the end of her or everything she ever wanted?
After all, everything started with a heist.

Maybe you could re-think the structure in this part of the sentence, because the fluidity is broken slightly.
If stealing a single piece of work makes me gain 4 millions....Why the heck do I bother going to school?
Emma has pretty eyes. Well she does if she's the girl from the picture
- - Feb 11
A resignation mission? Why do I feel that it won't make her resign from theft but from life itself?
dareka_san dareka_san Feb 11
A shiver went down my spine at the last part........Scary!
                              It's awesome! Can't wait for more!! Keep it up. ;-)
1DeadBody 1DeadBody Jul 09
This is such a great start for the book! You managed to give us enough background about the characters without revealing everything! Just loving it! 😚