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most_bay By most_bay Updated Jan 14

I pledge myself to you, my love,
My life is no longer my own,
My afterlife is unknown,
If I'm fortunate, If I'm adequate,
If I'm to be in the heavens,
I'll plead for my home.

Your eyes are my home,
Your breath is my air,
Your voice is my song,
Your arms are my shrine,
Your heart is my altar,
Your smile is my prayer,
Your hand is my prize,
I ache to make you mine.

I need you in every way,
 My rib is not in place. 
 My certain heart calls you,
 My present, my future, my solace,
 My first and last, my onliest love.
 My other self, my life,
'I love you ' is not enough. 

Melody Summer, a nineteen  year old homeless girl with a tragic past. Shy and introvert with major insecurities. Melody aged out of foster care and was left without guidance to fend for herself in the concrete jungle of Manhattan. When she meets Akram Sadiq. Twenty one, Handsome Egyptian-American, Juilliard student, her life takes a very  unexpected turn.

**This story is a first draft so hopefully will be edited once finished. **

Lighthouse60 Lighthouse60 Oct 07, 2016
So far your first chapter has a really good flow and is heart warming. I feel sad for Melody already. Good job. Also the poem you wrote is really good. Keep writing.
vanuSh99 vanuSh99 Jan 12
Lovely description! Immediately grabs your attention towards the lonely girl! Already feeling connected to Melody! 👍
All the very best. You're doing a great job so far and I'm loving this. May god bless u and take care (((:::
vanuSh99 vanuSh99 Jan 12
The first chapter was quite intriguing. Great job! I'm sure this will turn out to be one of the bests I've read so far. I'm already taken with the girl. All the best! 👍
MariamH30 MariamH30 Dec 17, 2016
I love this! "Not very fluent in English" he said. Dude you rock.
WriterUntilInfinity WriterUntilInfinity Nov 02, 2016
Most people prefer shorter chapters. I'm loving the plot so far! And your writing style is amazing, too!