MELODY (v.slow updates)

MELODY (v.slow updates)

24.1K Reads 5.4K Votes 57 Part Story
most_bay By most_bay Updated Mar 09

I pledge myself to you, my love,
My life is no longer my own,
My afterlife is unknown,
If I'm fortunate,
If I'm adequate,
To be in the heavens,
I'll plead for my home.

Your eyes are my home,
Your breath is my air,
Your voice is my song,
Your arms are my shrine,
Your heart is my altar,
Your smile is my prayer,
Your hand is my prize,
I ache to make you mine.

I need you in every way,
 My rib is not in place. 
 My certain heart calls you,
 My present,
 My future,
 My solace,
 My first and last,
 My onliest love.
 My other self, 
 My life,
'I love you' is not enough. 

Melody Summer is a nineteen year old homeless girl with a tragic past. Shy and introverted​ with major insecurities. Melody aged out of foster care and was left without guidance to fend for herself in the concrete jungle of Manhattan. When she meets Akram Sadiq. Twenty one, Handsome Juilliard student, her life takes a very unexpected turn.

**This story is a first draft so hopefully will be edited once finished.

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Neillayosi Neillayosi Jun 20, 2017
I just read your story,  and i think the story is interesting .😉
                              Keep Writing. !!! 😊
                              And i will always vote and comment.
Padfoot621 Padfoot621 Jul 08, 2017
HOLY COW!!! Your writing is so descriptive and beautiful, just absolutely Phenomenal!!!
Hey! I'm here re-reading because it's been way too long! I LOVE the picture. It's a different one from last time. It's awesome. And your writing is even better than I remember. I'm excited to dive in again 😁
cchinu cchinu Jul 06, 2017
That was a nice opening act, showing me many things and yet keeps me guessing.
HijabiMuslim101 HijabiMuslim101 Oct 22, 2017
I didn't knew you had such talent. I guess I underestimated you
- - Jun 24, 2017
A very interesting start.. the way you introduced the character was really good..