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most_bay By most_bay Updated Apr 02

I pledge myself to you, my love,
My life is no longer my own,
My afterlife is unknown,
If I'm fortunate, If I'm adequate,
If I'm to be in the heavens,
I'll plead for my home.

Your eyes are my home,
Your breath is my air,
Your voice is my song,
Your arms are my shrine,
Your heart is my altar,
Your smile is my prayer,
Your hand is my prize,
I ache to make you mine.

I need you in every way,
 My rib is not in place. 
 My certain heart calls you,
 My present, my future, my solace,
 My first and last, my onliest love.
 My other self, my life,
'I love you ' is not enough. 

Melody Summer, a nineteen  year old homeless girl with a tragic past. Shy and introvert with major insecurities. Melody aged out of foster care and was left without guidance to fend for herself in the concrete jungle of Manhattan. When she meets Akram Sadiq. Twenty one, Handsome Egyptian-American, Juilliard student, her life takes a very  unexpected turn.

**This story is a first draft so hopefully will be edited once finished. *

Just read the first chap. The emotions mainly vulnerability thats portrayed is outstanding. I felt like i am going to lose job and thinking in her shoe of what i am going to do.. a grt start
VioletEden VioletEden 2 days ago
I seriously have the same thought process like Melody. not kidding ya, author.
I'm glad I took the time to read your poetry first. I see similarities in your style.
First attempt? Wow! then... You are so good at writing. I really really loved your writing style 👍👍
I loved loved loved the way you wrote this! 
                              I had this book in my library for so long, but couldn't read it due to some thing or the other.
                              But now, I can't resist reading the entire story! 
                              Great beginning.
ananti19 ananti19 Mar 20
@SFKhushi Here's the book you were looking for. This is a must read is what I mean =)