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most_bay By most_bay Updated Jun 17

I pledge myself to you, my love,
My life is no longer my own,
My afterlife is unknown,
If I'm fortunate, If I'm adequate,
If I'm to be in the heavens,
I'll plead for my home.

Your eyes are my home,
Your breath is my air,
Your voice is my song,
Your arms are my shrine,
Your heart is my altar,
Your smile is my prayer,
Your hand is my prize,
I ache to make you mine.

I need you in every way,
 My rib is not in place. 
 My certain heart calls you,
 My present, my future, my solace,
 My first and last, my onliest love.
 My other self, my life,
'I love you ' is not enough. 

Melody Summer, a nineteen  year old homeless girl with a tragic past. Shy and introverted​ with major insecurities. Melody aged out of foster care and was left without guidance to fend for herself in the concrete jungle of Manhattan. When she meets Akram Sadiq. Twenty one, Handsome Egyptian-American, Juilliard student, her life takes a very  unexpected turn.

**This story is a first draft so hopefully will be edited once finished. *

Neillayosi Neillayosi Jun 20
I just read your story,  and i think the story is interesting .😉
                              Keep Writing. !!! 😊
                              And i will always vote and comment.
rampoorna rampoorna Apr 28
I can relate to this very much. We always wonder "what is wrong with me?" For something we haven't done.
ramchanduri ramchanduri Apr 28
Great beginning. You portrayed her emotions very well. I could see everything before my eyes.
Just read the first chap. The emotions mainly vulnerability thats portrayed is outstanding. I felt like i am going to lose job and thinking in her shoe of what i am going to do.. a grt start
vanuSh99 vanuSh99 Apr 24
@s_huddar  @BSakshi  @shama_deborah  You guys should try this book. This is a really sweet story. I'm sure you won't regret. Do tell others who you think would be interested. :)
VioletEden VioletEden Apr 22
I seriously have the same thought process like Melody. not kidding ya, author.