The Coleman Boys and Myself

The Coleman Boys and Myself

122K Reads 3.8K Votes 22 Part Story
Shelby Alane By XHeartlessCryBabyX Completed

Joanna Parker lost her Mother, her little sister Lilly, and her little brother Mikhail in a Horrible car crash... Her little brother Arron and her were the only survivors. Their god mother Jenna Coleman shows up and brings them to live with her and her family of nine.

The last time Joanna saw the boys was about seven years ago, so she instantly thought of all of the teasing and fighting she had done with the boys. Will Joanna and Arron get along with the boys, and will they be able to find a way to once again be happy in their lives...

Thats means its ypur own book you should be able yo what you want.
Can I just say how shitty that must be to see EVERYTHING flash before your eyes?
Why would people do that?? Thats so harsh. If they dont want mistakes then they can bloody well write their own books. Every author makes mistakes.
joudi749 joudi749 Mar 14
Nice begining but You didnt show deep sad feelings about loosing the twins and Mother !
XHeartlessCryBabyX XHeartlessCryBabyX Nov 15, 2011
@BeckySmileyHolden Thanks. I'm usually not very good at writing stories. So I was kinda happy that this one got so many reads already.
XHeartlessCryBabyX XHeartlessCryBabyX Nov 15, 2011
@BeckySmileyHolden I've read Surviving the Mclane Boys, but that was a while ago and I don't think that it has anything in common with it. I've read so many stories since then, I can barely remember what I write have the time.