A package shows up to your door. Soon a another one shows up.
Two things 1: When I read 'BingSepticEye' I was really confused but almost spit out my milk because I realised Google v. Bing is like a thing or something. 2: Is it bad that when I read 'package' I thought about a dudes...dude-hood?
You need to make your chapters a longer,That makes them better so after you leave them on a cliff hanger it gets way better
There's something called BingSepticEye? I mean, I knew there was Googleplier. That's great. YahooDiePie? FireToastFox? CryaoticExplorer?