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Karl's Kingdom: Discovery

Karl's Kingdom: Discovery

32.7K Reads 546 Votes 7 Part Story
MB By Mpb2012 Updated Aug 04, 2016

NOTE: Hello. Here are the first few chapters of my newly redrafted novel. I am poor and therefore need to syphon the pennies I can, so if you want more head on over to Amazon or Radish @MarkBoutros and for a tiny contribution you can keep a writer writing and I'll one day be able to put more free stuff out.

Below average twenty-year old Karl has poor eyesight, can't throw, and has never really fit in. That's ok though, because he lives in Flowforn where people are encouraged to live their dreams, and having failed at so many jobs he lives his dream of doing absolutely nothing. However, when the tyrant man-hawk, Arazod, shows up and claims Flowforn, Karl is imprisoned and his dream is destroyed. He escapes thanks to Princess Sabrinia, who has agreed to marry Arazod, and his adventure begins. He encounters fierce and fantastical obstacles, enemies, allies, and explores a world that forces him to become the person he was destined to be.

I like her response at the end, I can't wait for their next interaction.
weirdncrazy weirdncrazy Aug 02, 2016
Boo. Boo. Arazod sucks! All boo Awful Arazod! *throws tomatoes at the man-hawk* BOO! *then gets thrown into the dungeon to rot the rest of her days*
I am starting to seriously doubt the intelligence level of both the protagonist and the antagonist.
weirdncrazy weirdncrazy Aug 02, 2016
Getting turned into a flying elephant and being devoured by the Great Dragon at the top of mount Hastovia. Better cross that off your bucket list.
http-saurus http-saurus Oct 20, 2016
Wow i like this so far. I wish this will be #Wattys2016 its actually Great! Ok I'll continue reading XD
The_derpette The_derpette Jun 13, 2016
Guy one: "I thought you stopped drinking, but here you are, chugging down cans of beer!" Guy two: "I saw a crow hatch  just now. I'm celebrating by drinking."