Where are the Kids?

Where are the Kids?

6.2K Reads 66 Votes 1 Part Story
babygirl By mjfuimaono Updated Nov 12, 2010

There is a serial killer kidnapping and killing young children. Detective Al is on the case and needs to follow the clues to save the lives of the next three victims before they are killed.

AimeeFWT AimeeFWT May 27, 2013
Cool! Make a good ending please! Make the children alive at the ending! Make a sense ending, not ending strange.
ReneCara ReneCara May 25, 2012
She's 11 years old. She probably already forgot about this!... I'll ask her when i get home. Lol
CannonQueen CannonQueen Mar 30, 2012
Why is the story left incomplete ? What happened to those children? :/
dstack60 dstack60 Jan 04, 2011
Omg!!! Finish this story! It is so exciting! You have so many options to go with! I neeed to know what the kids were thinking and what the cops past was!!  
                              
Dem-Vamp Dem-Vamp Dec 23, 2010
It's really good and I love how the point of view is from the detectives instead of the parents or children
katelynmarie321 katelynmarie321 Dec 03, 2010
i dont think that the beginning was too fast at all! i think this is an amazing story and i would love to read more :D