There is a serial killer kidnapping and killing young children. Detective Al is on the case and needs to follow the clues to save the lives of the next three victims before they are killed.
Cool! Make a good ending please! Make the children alive at the ending! Make a sense ending, not ending strange.
She's 11 years old. She probably already forgot about this!... I'll ask her when i get home. Lol
Why is the story left incomplete ? What happened to those children? :/
Omg!!! Finish this story! It is so exciting! You have so many options to go with! I neeed to know what the kids were thinking and what the cops past was!!
It's really good and I love how the point of view is from the detectives instead of the parents or children
i dont think that the beginning was too fast at all! i think this is an amazing story and i would love to read more :D