Falling in love was not part of the mission

Falling in love was not part of the mission

980 Reads 15 Votes 3 Part Story
Davila By theFluffyrose Updated Dec 06, 2010

Rihley Paxton is a crazy ,wild ,free spirited girl with a secret.... her family  is in the cia .when her dad dies and her older brother is her only family she goes to live with some old family friends .waiting for when her 17th birthday to come because that is when her training begins .she will go though lots of stuff to be the best agent that she can be . follow her through her journy will she will make friend ,enimies and mayby even find love .but youll have to read to find out about the choices that she makes

Anahita Anahita Dec 26, 2010
I really like it, although I agree with the person below on the punctuation, but you should keep it up:)
kaytiebean kaytiebean Dec 05, 2010
you fanned me so i felt obliged to read your story and so far I LOVE IT! onto the next chappy
xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 27, 2010
i like it....humour can be a really effective technique to use throughout the story
                              also, could u check out my story if u have time
                              thnxx