The Hidden Twin Sister (Arcana Famiglia Fanfic)

The Hidden Twin Sister (Arcana Famiglia Fanfic)

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Camille Joy Pulido By Amazedbybeauty03 Updated Feb 20, 2017

Power needs to be controlled, in order to use it, one must learn how to control it... 

Bonfilia calandra, born with three arcana cards, the #3- the empress, the #15- the devil and the last hidden card that her father Mondo and her mother Sumire haven't told the rest, the #22 the destroyer or rather the end of the world, 

She was raised in a small palace located at the top of the mountain, there, she grow up to be the princess of her own, with the five arcana users protecting her and the servants taking care of her, yet even with those, bonfilia isn't satisfied,

Wanting to see what's below and longing to see her family, she trained to control her power,

****and now, years passed, what would happen if mondo suddenly reveal that felicita has a twin?, how will the arcana famiglia react to this sudden news?? ****

(I'm not really good in giving summaries, tehee:3.. I'm not the owner of the la storia Della arcana famiglia story, this is just a fanfic and the fruit of my emagination:3)

  • arcanafamiglia
  • cards
  • family
  • fanfiction
  • friendship
  • reverseharem
  • shoujo
  • twins
mygbbongbbong mygbbongbbong Mar 29, 2017
Hello :3 I'm sorry to bother you but when you write a dialogue,the first word after the quotation mark should be in capital letter 😅 once again I apologise to point out your mistakes because this is awkward to me (。ŏ﹏ŏ)
IvyPuppyLover IvyPuppyLover Apr 16, 2017
You did a great job!
                              Next step is to check comers and capitals. You'll be a pro in no time!!!🙂🙂😎🤓
IvyPuppyLover IvyPuppyLover Apr 16, 2017
I'm guessing that Pase should be capitalised as it is a name. You'd wrote that Pace asked papa. Also in that same sentence you change from past tense to present tense. You wrote,' looked at him then nod his head," should be,"looked at him then nodded his head."
mygbbongbbong mygbbongbbong Mar 29, 2017
I can help you with editing if you want,I used to help people edit their stories on quotev 😅