One Piece Portgas D. Ace  X Reader

One Piece Portgas D. Ace X Reader

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shirah99 By shirah99 Updated Nov 21

(Y/n) had a mother who is really protective. She always gave her a lot of money for her to use without working a lot. That's make her not independent woman, weak and sensitive.

When (y/n) was left by her boyfriend, she felt really sad. So she decided to apply for National Service to change herself. That's when she met Ace, the commander.

LastDragons LastDragons 5 days ago
This sounds... Bad. It would sound better like this "I gave her my best 'seriously?' look." Or something like that.
LastDragons LastDragons 5 days ago
Complainly is not a word. "He complained" is a better way to put it.
Is that actually sanji in there I feel like that's something zoro would say NOT sanji
LastDragons LastDragons 5 days ago
We've known each other or we have known each other. They sound better.