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One Piece Portgas D. Ace  X Reader

One Piece Portgas D. Ace X Reader

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shirah99 By shirah99 Updated Jun 19

(Y/n) had a mother who is really protective. She always gave her a lot of money for her to use without working a lot. That's make her not independent woman, weak and sensitive.

When (y/n) was left by her boyfriend, she felt really sad. So she decided to apply for National Service to change herself. That's when she met Ace, the commander.

LastDragons LastDragons Nov 29, 2016
This sounds... Bad. It would sound better like this "I gave her my best 'seriously?' look." Or something like that.
LastDragons LastDragons Nov 28, 2016
Complainly is not a word. "He complained" is a better way to put it.
Raichaelrocks Raichaelrocks Aug 21, 2016
Is that actually sanji in there I feel like that's something zoro would say NOT sanji
LastDragons LastDragons Nov 29, 2016
We've known each other or we have known each other. They sound better.