Don't Let Our Story Die

Don't Let Our Story Die

236 Reads 4 Votes 3 Part Story
Sarah By Tainted_Rose Updated Feb 14, 2011

intro to wolf packs. blah blah blah. very old idea

xXTashaEatsHeartsXx xXTashaEatsHeartsXx Nov 13, 2010
i really liked your story! i'll be sure to read some others of yours too! :)
JazzTayla JazzTayla Nov 11, 2010
Just read the first part of ur story and thought it was good :)
candiceandjake candiceandjake Nov 11, 2010
The spacing is not right at all. You have no paragraphs, just random sentences that don't flow because they are cut off mid-sentence. I noticed ur other story is like that too. Good storyline and writing!
Tainted_Rose Tainted_Rose Nov 10, 2010
Thanks so much guys! I went through it and did put some more space so hopefully it will be easier now. Thanks for the time and I will check yours too.
cutiebuny cutiebuny Nov 09, 2010
if you kept some space in between the conversations,your story will be so much longer. besides that, i think it's really great so far. keep up the good work! :) :) :) :)
Supernaturalchic33 Supernaturalchic33 Nov 09, 2010
I like this story too!!! Like i said before just make the parapgraphs have more space in between them and when people are talking so its  not all jumbled together..