What Should Have Never Happened...Happened.

What Should Have Never Happened...Happened.

9.3K Reads 177 Votes 13 Part Story
Ezar Soeparman By RadicalEzz Updated Mar 20

Taylor Kennedy Smith is normal sixteen year-old girl who loves hanging out and partying with her friends. One night she sneaks off to a party expecting to have some fun, never did she imagine that she’d have a little too much fun.

PrinceDubb PrinceDubb Sep 08, 2011
I like this..real..exciting..i felt the passion between Taylor and Thomas..lol good..reading on..
CrazyDaezy CrazyDaezy Sep 06, 2011
Tense, exciting atmosphere with an epic ending that could go anywhere... I like it. Definately reading on!
sam_97 sam_97 Sep 06, 2011
exciting. the way you use ur word are really good, and teens could really relate to situations like this. good work! i just hope it doesnt turn out cliched. 0_o
Lorretta Lorretta Sep 06, 2011
I love the way you use your words, absolutely flawless and it really keeps you reading on , well done xoxo ;-)
purplecursor purplecursor Sep 05, 2011
omg they did the dirty?! hihi anyway about your novel, it's really good:)
RadicalEzz RadicalEzz Sep 05, 2011
@Kristey Thank you !! lol, was the story really that ...eh... that you've made an awkward conversation? jokes, nah no probs thanks again X