These are my two entries for the APR contest!!
1st part: My rewrite of Chapter 47 pt 1 & 2
2nd part: Before Chris met Holly Evers plus a quick overview all the way up to Chapter 50.
BOTH IN CHRIS' P.O.V.
u actually made me want to c chris in movies..urs n Jordan's combine. awesome.
u made me want to c how sexily cool n composed n handsome Chris is. n not to forget Jeremy in his suit too.
Everything was great. The last page did confuse me a little though. But, all in all, well done! I wish I could attempt to write something:) I love to write, but nothing like these stories!!! :)
good job!! i really like this version of yours since you didnt fail to capture the chemistry of holly and chris = ) congrats!!
Im confuzzled. Is this the begining of a story? Or is there something before it?
Whoa... amazing! You really got Chris' attitude right! lol great job! ^^