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Cobra and Lucy

Cobra and Lucy

23.6K Reads 671 Votes 14 Part Story
Lucy4572 By Lucy4572 Updated Oct 17, 2016

Kinna hates cobra when she learns that because of him she was a snake for 16 years of her life. Cobra realizes that Kinna is not his mate how is then? I don't own Fairytail Hiro Mashima does this is a disclaimer.

i was kinda confused at first cause it kindadidnt make sense .... i have a question .. ok so dont get me wrong its a good book but do you read it after ur done or no jw
VampBae16 VampBae16 Apr 12
liked: plot
                              DISlike: set up, reading pattern (how are we pose to tell whos talking nya~)
                              fixes? YES
whitegorgan whitegorgan Sep 20, 2016
I really like just could you work on punctuation because I am getting confused on where one person is talking or they are thinking .
FandomAlert31 FandomAlert31 Jul 11, 2016
I like it but maybe you could try a different format because I got a little confused but nonetheless I like the plot
milliewolf123 milliewolf123 Aug 06, 2016
Your pov's don't make sense you can't tell when people are talking or not
Lucy4572 Lucy4572 Aug 07, 2016
Thanks for the feedback I was rushing this chapter because people keep sending me messages. I appreciate the feedback please inform me of anything else I need to improve or fix thank you sincerely Lucy4572!