Cobra and Lucy

Cobra and Lucy

16.9K Reads 481 Votes 14 Part Story
Lucy4572 By Lucy4572 Updated Oct 17, 2016

Kinna hates cobra when she learns that because of him she was a snake for 16 years of her life. Cobra realizes that Kinna is not his mate how is then? I don't own Fairytail Hiro Mashima does this is a disclaimer.

whitegorgan whitegorgan Sep 20, 2016
I really like just could you work on punctuation because I am getting confused on where one person is talking or they are thinking .
Fairytailgirl123 Fairytailgirl123 Jul 11, 2016
I like it but maybe you could try a different format because I got a little confused but nonetheless I like the plot
milliewolf123 milliewolf123 Aug 06, 2016
Your pov's don't make sense you can't tell when people are talking or not
Lucy4572 Lucy4572 Aug 07, 2016
Thanks for the feedback I was rushing this chapter because people keep sending me messages. I appreciate the feedback please inform me of anything else I need to improve or fix thank you sincerely Lucy4572!