Kinna hates cobra when she learns that because of him she was a snake for 16 years of her life. Cobra realizes that Kinna is not his mate how is then? I don't own Fairytail Hiro Mashima does this is a disclaimer.
I really like just could you work on punctuation because I am getting confused on where one person is talking or they are thinking .
I like it but maybe you could try a different format because I got a little confused but nonetheless I like the plot
Your pov's don't make sense you can't tell when people are talking or not
Thanks for the feedback I was rushing this chapter because people keep sending me messages. I appreciate the feedback please inform me of anything else I need to improve or fix thank you sincerely Lucy4572!