Living with the bad boy

Living with the bad boy

32.5K Reads 1K Votes 28 Part Story
Juhanna Isip By coldgurl22 Completed

What would you do when your parents suddenly died in a car crash  and when you realize that your mom's best friend is going to adopt you...and what would you do when you realize that your going to live with the school's bad boy.....*let's out a high pitched scream* ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!......

nerdy050 nerdy050 Aug 14
I love Selena and Taylor they're one of my favorite actors/music artist
Not trying to hate, but stop with the "and yeah" and "so yeah"
I don't want to hate but you  are missing a bunch of punctuation
Constructive criticism:
                              1. The storyline you are going for seems very interesting.
                              2. However, it lacks some detail and has a few grammar/spelling issues.
                              
                              Still a great chapter!
_lighskinn_ _lighskinn_ Nov 27
When I read it I thought she meant the "hotline bling". Drake