Vampires at Stake

Vampires at Stake

77.3K Reads 531 Votes 30 Part Story
Joce By EverWonders Completed

At 17, Avery Stewart thought that her life couldn't get anymore complicated than having to face her parent's death, but she was wrong. The move from one state to another thrust her into a new world she never even knew existed. In this new world, everything thing that you thought impossible could be a possibility. And in this new world, Avery discovers her place to be even more important than she thought as a dark force lurks in the shadow, determined to destroy anything that stand in his way to power. Avery may seem no more different than any other teenage girl, but she was destined to end the darkness and save the world. 


This was the very first story I have written and posted on Wattpad. I'll warn you that if you read this story then beware of my grammar and unedited text. I wrote this story when I was teen and if you want a story with greater dept and similar genre of vampires then read my other story, Till Death Do Us Apart. This story is loosely based around Vampires at Stake with a few differences. 
http://www.wattpad.com/story/24649305-till-death-do-us-apart

It's good but I suggest an editor for minor grammatical errors
aphroditedd aphroditedd Jan 25, 2013
I can't even read past the first page because there are so many misspellings and grammar mistakes. It's also lacking a lot of realism. I think you've got a great backbone for a draft, but it needs a lot of proof reading and editing.
EverWonders EverWonders Jan 06, 2011
@marilynjacksonO sorry it took so long but i finally checked out your story.
EverWonders EverWonders Jan 06, 2011
@marilynjacksonO sorry it took so long but i finally checked out your story.
The_it_Girl The_it_Girl Jan 03, 2011
Thankyou so much for dedicating this chapter to me ;) You really made me happy :D
shortyteee shortyteee Sep 06, 2010
I really like it so far but you will probs need to proof read, cause some things were confusing because of the mistakes, besides that it is very good!