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Please Protect Me

Please Protect Me

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midnightVeil By midnightVeil Updated Apr 26, 2012

Amber Scarlett Winston is a werewolf but something is different about her. Something dangerous and needed to be protected. She struggles to survive and her pack did everything to protect her but what happens when she meets Ashton ? The alpha of the pack that was assigned to protect her

listenup247 listenup247 Jul 21, 2013
I like the plot of your story but your use of tenses seem to be a bit confused.
mandy1128 mandy1128 Jan 23, 2013
ITS SO SUPER DOOPER GOOD! I LOVE IT! Maybe just change it to past tense. Instead of I stand up, make it I stood up. Its really good and im loving it. Im a big writer (not famous, i just write a lot of short stories) and am kinda big on grammar and what makes sense. I LOVE THIS THOUGH!!!
midnightVeil midnightVeil Jan 24, 2012
@sabbi1117 Aww thankies haha. Really ? Nice person whos very proper aye ? Hahaha :) Thanks. Aww you made me happy *wipes tears*
fireworksofdance fireworksofdance Jan 23, 2012
lol i love how you say "hey guys please call me sophie" and no im not tryring to be mean i just think its so funny how you add a please when telling people your name. you seem like a nice person whos very proper!!! lol thats so the oppisite of me!
midnightVeil midnightVeil Oct 26, 2011
@invisiblewriter haha sorry for the errors.. i'm not really good in writing. Thank you so much !! :D