Mary Sue Test

Mary Sue Test

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Noah By Noralorah Updated Nov 23

Send in your OC's and I will evaluate them based on their looks, personality, backstory and various other relevant things to decide wether or not your OC is a Mary Sue as well as giving you a few pointers on how to improve it.

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Do you review bleach OCs? If so I have one I want to make sure my one isn't a Mary Sue
cutiepuff13 cutiepuff13 Jul 14
Would you mind checking my anime books? You dont even have to read all of them just comment on the characters pls😁
Nubeviolet Nubeviolet Nov 05
Yes, is still here. xD (But, I think that the last game, was exactly, the last)
I have one
                              
                              (From my book) 
                              Ciara Cride
                              Female
                              18 years old
                              Imaginary friend to Jack
                              /is mute/
                              Very shy, timid and quiet(ironic) around other people but is very energetic, confident and proud around Jack
                              Red hair, hazel eyes. Her hair is cut with bangs and reaches down to the middle of her neck
I don't honestly think that any of my characters are Mary Sue or at least too much of it, so if you could look at my OC book and comment a rating that'd be cool
Wait so does that mean you can review characters in your own story that is not apart of any fandom?