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When The Bitch Falls (Fervor Series 3)

When The Bitch Falls (Fervor Series 3)

144K Reads 6.1K Votes 60 Part Story
Arianne Fel By aryanugh Completed

She was a black sheep and a shame to her own family. She was a worthless woman with no work done. She was called a slut for chasing someone who didn't like her. That's how they judged Kira Fuentes. And perhaps, that's how she looked at herself, too.

She thought she was the bitchiest, but fate was even bitchier.

jongiya jongiya Jun 06, 2016
Be yourself Kira, tsaka if you really love him at mahalin ka din nya in the future eventually dadating din siguroyong pagbabago sa sarili mo, pero wag mong ipilit o magkunwari, sa huli ikaw lang din ang magiging talo sa ganyan.
BlackGingier BlackGingier Apr 11, 2016
hey bitch kira HAHAHA! just be true to who you are ;) magugustuhan ka ng sinasabi mong the man deeply inlove mo HUAHUAHUA~
akomarits akomarits Apr 10, 2016
Good start. Maiksi lang ang prologue but enough to catch the attention of the readers.
kuya_mark kuya_mark Apr 06, 2016
Magaling. With just counted words you made the prologue interesting. 'Yung tipong anticipation agad ang makukuha ng readers.
SmileBogummy SmileBogummy Apr 09, 2016
You write prologues like your a trained one. :) Did you tried writing workshops? :D
Stevhine18 Stevhine18 Apr 15, 2016
Wag pilitin kung di kaya, dapat magpakatotoo ka lang. Dahil dapat mahalin ka niya kung ano ka hindi kung ano yung magandang ugali lang na meron ka, dapat mahalin ka niya ng buong pagkatao mo. Poging Stevhine tip 101