Searching For Jane

Searching For Jane

3.7K Reads 141 Votes 11 Part Story
Livvi By AndSheWrites Completed

After the loss of his daughter in a horrific car crash, Alan spirals through a journey of paranoia and insanity in order to reunite his shattered family. 
As loneliness and confusion grip him, will Alan recover from the blow that ruined his life?

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  • insanity
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  • suspense
littlemissmoonshoes littlemissmoonshoes Dec 17, 2011
I really love this. It brings up an interesting question because I don't think I could ever do that job. Brilliant I am really enjoying it!
Hannah4abit Hannah4abit Oct 15, 2011
interesting read so far. it looks good! I'm going to read on :)
Kara_writes Kara_writes Oct 14, 2011
Urgh. What a horrible job to do! I don't think I could EVER do anything like that!  Good storyline so far--reading on.
Irissa Irissa Oct 13, 2011
Oh my i don't think i could do her job at all, i am going to read more =) Just a little hint though add more detail it will help your writing alot trust me.
AndSheWrites AndSheWrites Oct 12, 2011
@tianajade Thank you for that! I have gone through and (hopefully?) improved on taht ;D
The_Black_Butterfly The_Black_Butterfly Oct 11, 2011
Nice start, but I think it's a bit rushed (or it's just me).