Searching For Jane

Searching For Jane

3.6K Reads 136 Votes 11 Part Story
Livvi By AndSheWrites Completed

After the loss of his daughter in a horrific car crash, Alan spirals through a journey of paranoia and insanity in order to reunite his shattered family. 
As loneliness and confusion grip him, will Alan recover from the blow that ruined his life?

littlemissmoonshoes littlemissmoonshoes Dec 17, 2011
I really love this. It brings up an interesting question because I don't think I could ever do that job. Brilliant I am really enjoying it!
Hannah4abit Hannah4abit Oct 15, 2011
interesting read so far. it looks good! I'm going to read on :)
Kara_writes Kara_writes Oct 14, 2011
Urgh. What a horrible job to do! I don't think I could EVER do anything like that!  Good storyline so far--reading on.
Irissa Irissa Oct 13, 2011
Oh my i don't think i could do her job at all, i am going to read more =) Just a little hint though add more detail it will help your writing alot trust me.
AndSheWrites AndSheWrites Oct 12, 2011
@tianajade Thank you for that! I have gone through and (hopefully?) improved on taht ;D
The_Black_Butterfly The_Black_Butterfly Oct 11, 2011
Nice start, but I think it's a bit rushed (or it's just me).