The Blessed Ones

The Blessed Ones

1.3K Reads 28 Votes 4 Part Story
Komekoro By Komekoro Updated Nov 21, 2010

The realm of Neamir is slowly falling into chaos. But the words of the prophet Fadirth comfort the people. "There will come a day when one of fire, one of earth, one of air and one of water will band together and find the one of dreams. The ones of love, life, death, and time shall find the others, and these blessed ten shall free us from the chaos." This is their tale.

Fab4Freak Fab4Freak Nov 14, 2010
Wow, this is a really good story! I've never heard of something like this being done, so bravo for that! And you have good grammar, which I hate when some people fail to use. The story line really draws you in. Continue, please :)
Komekoro Komekoro Nov 14, 2010
@maliciousLGP But she is wearing modified (read: shorter, knee length skirts) English peasant clothing.
Komekoro Komekoro Nov 12, 2010
@MsNikki if you like it that much, could you vote and fan? Thanks!
MsNikki MsNikki Nov 11, 2010
mmm. I L.O.V.E   IT! intense. can't wait for you to upload more.
                              
                              
                              please if you don't mind check out my story and leave a comment? thank you
                              
                              Two Bodies One Soul
Avancidy Avancidy Nov 11, 2010
Sure thing! I didn't find anything wrong in this part yet so it's good so far!
Komekoro Komekoro Nov 11, 2010
@addicted2shoujomanga XD!!!!!!! thank you! If there is anything I should fix please let me know!