to the men who fought and to the men who lost
A very nice homage to our veterans. If you have not, I would suggest you read Lieutenant Colonel John McCrae's "In Flanders Field." He did not survive the war.
You've got a few typos...I see they don't bother you, so I won't underscore them. :)
This poem is beautiful.
I think I gotta few tears building up in the corners of my eyes.
You definitely do them justice with this piece ^^