Why Me?

Why Me?

76 Reads 6 Votes 2 Part Story
lanalazar By lanalazar Updated Jun 29, 2013

How are you meant to react to seeing yourself dead?
Seanna was just a normal girl. Until she found herself dead. 
Now her best friend is moving on and forgetting her, whilst Seanna cant help but watch. One day stumbling in town, Seanna bumps into a normal boy, who can see her to. Will they fall in love? Will he help her? Or will he run away scared?

CarmenPond CarmenPond Mar 20, 2014
Interesting. 
                              But sometimes your sentences are very long, sometimes they're too short to quite relate to the others before that. You should definitely continue this story. Remember: You can't use all of your talent if you don't practice
CarmenPond CarmenPond Mar 20, 2014
I kinda like it. needs improvement, but a very good start. plz message me if you'd like detailed feedback.
sellURsouls sellURsouls Jun 29, 2013
WOW THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE AND MORE AND MORE ANDMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O'M FOLLOWING U AND VOTING!