Me and him

Me and him

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mindlesss__girl By mindlesss__girl Completed

Nicole was always quite she would hang out with her white best friend kailey (sorry if that is racist ) she was on the track team on the 4x400 n 800. But when this new guy comes and her best friend likes him too what will she do. Let her have him or go for him. But would he like a girl like her or will kailey take him. plus what will she do with the love square

BlueIsTheTrue BlueIsTheTrue Jun 19, 2013
You should pay more attention to grammar. Present/Past tense or like the difference between now and know or there, they're or their. Keep smiling:)
                              Btw you can read my stories I was kidding with you.
linnet17 linnet17 Jun 18, 2013
@Melmel141 i agree with @xxIridescent_Beauty .the story is absolutely good and amazing concept. :)
mindlesss__girl mindlesss__girl Jun 15, 2013
@xxIridescent_Beauty thank u for the advice I really needed it