Hiding In Plain Sight

Hiding In Plain Sight

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x rapunzel x By Rapunzel2013 Completed

***  WRITTEN 2013  ***
Rose and Jace have been best friends ever since she moved to his street nine years ago. But there's one main difference, one main problem. Jace is popular, and loved by everyone. Rose, well, she's the complete opposite. Preferring to be left alone, Rose hides away in books and keeps to herself. However, lately Rose's feelings have been changing and with that comes confusion. Would telling him how she feels destroy everything they already have, or start something new?

  • friends
  • romance
lovesleep98 lovesleep98 Jan 02, 2014
This is brilliant, I love your writing style, it just seems to flow, so easy and pleasant to read:)
brandymarie1987 brandymarie1987 Nov 06, 2013
They are quite a cute pair, can't wait to see the ending you have in store for them.
brandymarie1987 brandymarie1987 Nov 06, 2013
I really like how natural and not forced their dialogue seems. Great job so far.
diamondboy diamondboy Oct 17, 2013
Your dialogue has a conversational tone to it, which gives it a sense of reality. I like the voice of the character - it's very endearing. The reader can empathize with her. Good stuff!
Rapunzel2013 Rapunzel2013 Sep 27, 2013
Thanx so much for your comments<3
                              Ur support means so much to me xxx
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readergal21 readergal21 Aug 21, 2013
Thanks for the dedication!!! Awesome story please write more!!