The Woman in Panties

The Woman in Panties

769 Reads 16 Votes 1 Part Story
John Gabriel By JohnGbl Completed

A boy sees something he will never forget.

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AngelOfDarkness_X AngelOfDarkness_X Mar 04, 2015
I really enjoyed reading this.... love the way you set the scene....beautiful...
JohnGbl JohnGbl Aug 01, 2013
@SamieSands You're writing is fantastic! And thank you once again!
CarolinaC CarolinaC Jul 23, 2013
I love the feeling we have  of the child's world being pulled apart, thread by thread, to be replaced with the more complex, more dangerous adult world - but all without the child himself being aware of it.
JohnGbl JohnGbl Jun 29, 2013
@ECole789 Thank you very much, ECole, once again for your beautiful comment!
JohnGbl JohnGbl Jun 25, 2013
One more thing, if you please. Could you please say thank you very much to Owain from me? He was very kind when he told you that.
JohnGbl JohnGbl Jun 25, 2013
Thank you very much for your comment, sloanranger, for the three points mentioned, it makes the comment invaluable for my rethinking the way I write. Thank you for your vote. Thank you very much! I appreciate it!