The Fallen Petal - Severus Snape and Hermione Granger Love Story

The Fallen Petal - Severus Snape and Hermione Granger Love Story

8 Part Story 41.8K Reads 564 Votes
Lola By Lolcia1998 Updated Feb 15, 2012

Hermione found herself in a difficult situation, after the graduation party. She couldnt believe what happened and what will happen next? Is the man she adores going to make the move and help her or leave her all alone with the problem?

seulpeoyo seulpeoyo Jan 29, 2016 07:29PM
The concept it cute. The writing is ok. There's a lot of room for improvement. I'll keep reading though. I love Severus
Aisling1949 Aisling1949 Jun 19, 2015 10:47PM
i am 65 and my boy friend of 11 years is 39...what does age have to do eith anything?   love is love...actually!
Shocotaco321 Shocotaco321 May 06, 2015 02:38PM
What the actual hell. That was an eventful study hall… 
                                    This is so disturbing and weird. He is 21 years older than her, and just wtf.
Social-Moth Social-Moth Mar 26, 2015 12:24AM
I never thought I would ship them but there are firsts for everything
LostAtNight LostAtNight Oct 17, 2014 12:01AM
It's a good start for what could be a great book but it's missing big parts and moving very fast if you slow it down and add more details it could become in increasingly better
Lolcia1998 Lolcia1998 Jul 25, 2013 11:03AM
@tmdunt01 Oh YES! @makayla_salvatore015 Thank you! @ashykinzz thanks so much! @JanelleMary I will do my best!!