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I like the rhythm, and the message, although the result is fairly stark.
although the subject matter is not new, i find the angle slightly refreshing. i liked the 'Sitting in the corner' and 'Leaning against the corner'.
this is amazing ;') i have posted a poem as well and if you have time to check it out that would be awesome, if not that's okay but seriously I love this poem!
@all Thankyou are all those wonderful comments. It means alot xx :)
this is thoughtful quite!!:)
just edit the things I off dreamed to things I dreamt of?
just saying... positive criticism.. :)
That was.. DEEP! It really touched me because it's very relatable to many teenagers. Loved the way you rhyme in this poem! :D