Hidden Inside

Hidden Inside

471 Reads 65 Votes 1 Part Story
Steff :D By Intricate_details Completed

When things get unbearable.....All rights reserved

  • bad
  • blood
  • death
  • depressed
  • disappear
  • end
  • enough
  • knife
  • life
  • pain
  • poem
  • puddle
  • sadness
  • short
  • splasher23
  • suicidal
  • thoughts
OwainGlyn OwainGlyn Sep 07, 2014
I like the rhythm, and the message, although the result is fairly stark.
seasofme seasofme Aug 05, 2014
although the subject matter is not new, i find the angle slightly refreshing. i liked the 'Sitting in the corner' and 'Leaning against the corner'.
Styles_Forever2001 Styles_Forever2001 Nov 30, 2013
this is amazing ;') i have posted a poem as well and if you have time to check it out that would be awesome, if not that's okay but seriously I love this poem!
Intricate_details Intricate_details Nov 29, 2013
@all Thankyou are all those wonderful comments. It means alot xx :)
shirlin_s shirlin_s Nov 23, 2013
this is thoughtful quite!!:) 
                              i like!!:) 
                              just edit the things I off dreamed to things I dreamt of? 
                              just saying... positive criticism.. :)
Bebelayton Bebelayton Nov 17, 2013
That was.. DEEP! It really touched me because it's very relatable to many teenagers. Loved the way you rhyme in this poem! :D