I like her,she's a BADASS...

I like her,she's a BADASS...

77.1K Reads 3.3K Votes 16 Part Story
Sehunniexx By Sehunniexx Completed

Aurora is an italian,curvy (she says she's fat) and shy girl who left her mum and her home because of her violent dad.
She's forced to live in a place where everyone is hot and skinny,so she gets bullied everyday .
But one day she has enough of the bullying so she beats a the girl who insulted her...
But she didn't notice that another bully is watching her with a smirk..

  • badboy
  • badgirl
  • beautiful
  • body
  • bullying
  • chubby
  • curves
  • curvy
  • depression
  • fanfiction
  • fatgirl
  • freeyourbody
  • imbeautiful
  • losangeles
  • love
  • lovestory
  • romance
  • summer
I'm not being rude,I mean it's fine if you made any mistakes but the others are right.i respect you author.dont take it the wrong way
AbigailEstacio AbigailEstacio Sep 11, 2016
I hope I don't sound mean, but..
                              1. Add contractions.
                              2. Use commas and full stops.
                              3. If you are not sure of the meaning of a word, double check. (Using Google)
GiaDureja GiaDureja Aug 04, 2016
Embrace it. Whatever it is, it is YOU. It doesnt have to define you. If u define urself as fat others will too. Trust me I have learnt this the hard way.
Elizabeth0X0X Elizabeth0X0X Jun 13, 2016
I'm not trying to be nit picky about the grammar but you requested that we comment if any mistakes were made. It should be 'terrified of' not 'terrorized by'. I hope I've been of help :)
Marvel_Girl_2000 Marvel_Girl_2000 Dec 22, 2016
I feel like that girl in the cover probably has one of the most beautiful faces and personalities but is judged because of her curves...
inexplicable0 inexplicable0 Jun 17, 2016
Not being rude,just telling you for future reference I would use terrified