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Manor Dark

Manor Dark

15.2K Reads 712 Votes 5 Part Story
Stephen Clarkson By StephenClarkson Completed

The windowless Manor sits in solitude high above the village. It's Lord is a cruel and ruthless man, who is never seen yet is feared like no other. He is the cause of countless deaths with no apparent reason.

The darkness is growing. It is the time for change and for the fear to end.


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This was superb. The cliffhanger at the end was well written and I'm looking forward to see where this story goes. @LBoddez
Very cool! Amazing descriptions and the ending was very surprising! Can't wait to read more!
QV1209 QV1209 Apr 17
If this was in a store, I would buy it. Well-written. Can't wait to read more.
- - Jun 16, 2016
The end of this scene is invigorating. I want to know more about this person and the crystal! Great work. Spectacular writing style.
Rivensfell Rivensfell Jun 01, 2016
That was a fantastic opening! It drew me right in and everything was so vivid. And I love the way it twisted around at the end! I look forward to reading more.
- - Jun 16, 2016
Love the "symphony in crimson" line. Murder is gruesome, but this description draws me more into the motivations of the character.