Swashbuckling on the Edge

Swashbuckling on the Edge

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Emily Jansen By CruciformSpark7 Updated Jul 22

***SEQUEL TO SWASHBUCKLING IN THE DARK***

Having escaped once again from the reach of English law, Zaina, Dark and crew recuperate on a remote island.  Contemplating their uncertain future and recovering their losses, Dark and Zaina become entangled in a 50-year-old treasure hunt that leads them to unexpected places. 

Wanting to put an end to his long quest for vengeance, Sykes follows new leads in the chase for Captain Grimm. But as he draws closer to the truth, a deadly shadow stalks close behind, threatening to derail Sykes' future.

Alongside the mystery of Captain Grimm, an old legend resurfaces to complicate matters.  Pieces of an ancient chart, a conspiracy within the English court, a legendary pirate,  a devious mastermind and a long-forgotten treasure draw all players into a ghost's dangerous game which promises certain death or the greatest prize of the seven seas.

Highest Rating #68 in Adventure

Maybe change one of the "hot"s to something else? To be less repetitive c:
I don't know why I love this so much. :P It's just so chilling.
This is an amazing beginning. Your descriptions and writing style in general are amazing and this has just the correct level of mystery to keep you going. There were very few mistakes as well. Well done!!
midnightmvelvet midnightmvelvet Feb 10, 2016
Grimm perhaps? This is very ominous indeed. The blurb was exciting. I'm looking forward to more ;)
scot_hanson2000 scot_hanson2000 Jul 29, 2016
Great kickoff. I'm  curious to find out what's so dreadful, and I want a guy who keeps struggling onward to win through. Let's see what's next....  :)
Lacrine_Sienna Lacrine_Sienna Feb 28, 2016
Yes! So excited to get started on this! Saw it just yesterday though, heehee