Perfect Illusions, Part One

Perfect Illusions, Part One

4.1K Reads 113 Votes 13 Part Story
Mai By Finnick-Odeair Completed

Her best friend is in love with her, her parents are never around, and her new housemates include her teacher and his blind mother. Mizuki handles all of this in stride. All she ever wanted was a normal life, and though her current situation is anything but, Mizuki makes the best of it. Until a stranger appears out of no where, making strange claimes about angels, demons, and Death. Until she discovers her teacher might not be who he appears. And neither is she.

ella_enchanted ella_enchanted Dec 11, 2010
Wow, this is such an original and enthralling beginning! It's really different from other books I've read, and I think you've got great style. Keep on writing, I'm off to read more! -ella <3
Finnick-Odeair Finnick-Odeair Nov 19, 2010
I will admit I took the name of the book from the anime but I've never really seen the whole thing, just the first episode, so no. I like to derive my ideas from something but give a a story all of it's own. Thank you for commenting though!
ElizabethCole89 ElizabethCole89 Nov 19, 2010
I like it but can I ask you something? Is this story going to be anything like the anime "Death Note"? 
StephyRoxsUrSoxs StephyRoxsUrSoxs Nov 10, 2010
AHHHHHH hahaha u didn't NEED 2 mention me lol bt this looks amazing!