DOLL The Story of Luna December

DOLL The Story of Luna December

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savannah skarke By WeepingWillow Updated Oct 30, 2010

there is a secret service known as Zima who hunt down and kill humans for their souls; The souls are programed into these creatures known as DOLL's .Luna is a DOLL who is more of an outcast than a machine wants to be free from the walls of Zima and see the world.

ethine ethine Oct 31, 2010
It's pretty good so far, except I've noticed some spelling mistakes. For example you used the wrong there in the first sentence. It should be their because it's possessive. There are also some run ons in the story, but otherwise I like it XD
                              keep up the good work.
WeepingWillow WeepingWillow Oct 30, 2010
This the first of my story on wattpad so i'm kinda new to this stuff and i want to know what u think. i've been wanting to write this story for a long time and enjoy reading it! post a few comments and i'll write more:)