My Perfect Life With My Life...

My Perfect Life With My Life...

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mananonrocks By mananonrocks Updated May 10

Its a cute family story.. manan and their little bundle of joy..

Do read if u r intrested in manan stories..you will surely like it

makiagirl makiagirl May 15, 2016
Your book seems very good and interesting great job❤️🍵💯🙏🏽
Easterneva Easterneva Jun 01, 2016
Ok who is pia? Is jaan referred to pia. U might need fo rephrase if bit confusing .
Easterneva Easterneva Jun 01, 2016
Overall story has potential but require serious editing on grammer and punctuations. 
                              Other wise it's good .
Aww so cute.. im already luving itt.. eager to read ur story dii.. fallen in luv with ur way of writing.. especially through ur story ..my secret nd naughty heart😁😁
BeautySeraph BeautySeraph Jun 05, 2016
what is this.. " The broken angle and wounded prince " and " tumse hi " have exactly same characters...whats going on..who's copying whom..? plz trynna find new characters ... i mean u should find  something urs nd innovative ..  this is boring for readers like us..who have read those stories
Easterneva Easterneva Jun 01, 2016
You know this is a story and readers love reading stories in full form. So please avoid using text format or short forms. Like "N" for and, "hv" for have etc.