When The Lines Fade...

When The Lines Fade...

2 Part Story 305 Reads 15 Votes
J. Samuels. By Jason_Samuels Updated Oct 14, 2011

"When one becomes a double agent, he campaigns on behalf of one side while appearing to campaign for another. And that presents a conundrum. What if, in order to campaign for the other side, you were required to sacrifice one of your own?"
    
    Barely in his twenties and already a highly decorated military hero, Army Special Forces veteran Blake Kershaw entered a virginia college to make his mother doubly proud, earning a degree while recovering from woulds recieved in Afganistan. But when Blake's country asks him to help avert a terrorist plot involving a nuclear attack on U.S soil, graduation plans must change.
    
    Suddenly, Blake is preparing to become an operative deep within al-Qaeda's innermost circles, changing his entire identity -- even his face -- and journeying into a shadow world that leaves friends, family and, seemingly, even God far behind.
    
    The lines between friend and foe are fading...

Still really good! 
                                    
                                    But if you don't mind me saying, the formatting makes it a little hard to read. However, Wattie also makes it hard to keep things like indents and new paragraphs straight. It's always messing with mine. 
                                    
                                    Can't wait for next one!
iluvmusic14 iluvmusic14 Oct 22, 2011 11:17PM
I really like ur story!! I also really like how u describe everything:) it makes it easy to picture!  Can't wait to read more! ^_^
BornToWrite47 BornToWrite47 Oct 15, 2011 01:38AM
Yay! I'm so happy that you updated! 
                                    It was an amazing chapter!! :D 
                                    oh my gosh, Blake is seriously injured but he still thinks about his men (friends). He has a lot of courage. Go Blake! 
                                    I hope that he saves the men. :) 
                                    Can't wait for the next chapter. XD
Jason_Samuels Jason_Samuels Oct 14, 2011 01:12AM
@DayDreamer47 Lol.... Yeah i'll try and post 1 or two chappies a week.
                                    Thanks. Lol yeah too bad for Blake ehh?
                                    
                                    And yep WhiteCrown is the best.
                                    
                                    Thanks.
                                    
                                    J.S