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The Dragon's Familiar

The Dragon's Familiar

19.6K Reads 1.3K Votes 28 Part Story
Opal By Blue_Opal_Wolf Completed


They installed fear in the hearts of almost every person in the village Vernonae, a large village surrounding by deep dense forest. 

" Don't go into the forest." 
" You're not allowed." 
" You're  weak." 
" How are you even the duchesses daughter?" 

That's what Valkyrie had to face everyday. 

To her family, to her village she was the weak link, a disgrace. 

Always being compared to her sister who everyone said was better, beautiful, and more graceful then she would ever be. 

So what happens when a certain someone's friends disrupts a sleeping dragon. 

And what happens when they pin the blame on her? 

*loosely based on beauty and the beast

12/8/16: #117 in fantasy

AlkoHitch AlkoHitch Mar 09
I am pretty sure it can be merged with the paragraph above. It's kind if distracting with it by all of its lonesome.
I typed in dragon on google and I found it there, but it is not mine, it probably belongs to someone on insta cause is said under it
AlkoHitch AlkoHitch Mar 09
The chapter is good, but it needs more detail and it does need editing.
Great start! The only part that bugged me was in the beginning paragraph the character kept starting I as the beginning of a sentence.
Should have punched her sister in the guts before running away
AlexHunter2 AlexHunter2 Oct 10, 2016
This is great! Keep writing, I want to see more! Keep it up!