Expect The Unexpected

Expect The Unexpected

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uswnt139 By uswnt139 Completed

Riley Taylor was thought to have the perfect life; a starting spot on the US Women's National Soccer Team and the Washington Spirit, 2 Olympic titles, NCAA championships, a boyfriend who plays for the Washington Nationals, and a loving mother and little brother. However to her, its been the opposite. Her father died when she was 12 and she found out she was switched at birth at 19. But what would happen if only one of those heartbreaks was true?

- - Apr 28
I really liked the writing till now, but the last sentence a bit confused me: "happen to us, let alone my father". "Happen to them" = "happen to her father", so why did you use "let alone"? I mean, who else in their family could it refer to? Her mom, her little brother?
_futbolista _futbolista Dec 07, 2016
Hate those I sprained my MCL again two days ago it's the worst
LoveOnYa LoveOnYa Jun 01, 2016
I'm loving this and im gonna keep reading. Please check out my work and tell me what ya think (;