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Joanna By oniehayag Updated Mar 16

UNA FAYE BROOK  she is the pack punching bag and slave dog along side with her two best friends NICOLO AND NICHOLAS they are twins, her brother, sister and pack blames for her parent's death.
The only reason they stayed with their pack was for their mates. One night full moon on her 14 birthday she found her mate and same with her two best friends they also found their mate.
That day UNA found her mate is MALIK ARISON soon to be Alpha of      '' FIRE FLY PACK'' after they fully mated MALIK rejected UNA. She cannot handle the pain of the rejection before she runway, she mind link her two best friends NICOLO AND NICOLAS , if they want to join runway from the pack, her to best friend agree to join runway coz both of them been rejected also by their mates. 
They run in the forbidden forest no one enter their coz you will be dead, three of them stop running coz they are tired and then theirs was powerful howling in the dark forest , until they saw very huge BLACK wolves , 2 times bigger of the alpha, and then the BLACK wolf change his human form and then the man called my beloved daughter , she very confuse either of her two best friend , she didn't know , she only adopted that way her siblings hates her. She discover that her parent's is hybrid and royal , she have also two older brother and she also pregnant. After 2 years living her family and with her two children, she become powerful hybrid and strong, beautiful, sexy mother. Even her two best friends become more much stronger, and hot. Now they decide to go back their old pack to take revenge

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sleekchick101 sleekchick101 Jun 29, 2016
This book seems promising, but your grammar is terrible. No offence, but it's discouraging.
Mariea_Quinn Mariea_Quinn Sep 04, 2016
I like where. Your going but not to be rude or anything but the grammar is terrible and so is some of the spelling. I'm no one to talk but I'm just trying to help ya out
RoseAndWubee RoseAndWubee Nov 12, 2016
You dont need to have the names entirely capitalized. Just the first letter of it.
niquenique30 niquenique30 Aug 15, 2016
I really have to agree with @sleekchick101.....your grammar is horrible and it make you want to stop reading this book smh