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What's left of life

What's left of life

2.2K Reads 56 Votes 12 Part Story
Shay By letmeshine Updated Sep 24, 2013

For some living life to the fullest is their goal but not for Mia, An eighteen year old who lost her parents  and was left to look after her brother. She is alone in trying to make a life worth living for her brother, but what's of life itself when your living it for someone else right. That was the case until someone came along and tangled it all up for her, Someone who brought meaning when they arrived and made living  a little more exciting for her.

Vamptasy Vamptasy Sep 25, 2012
I'm really liking it, it's well written in the sense that I feel it emotionally. Still, as constructive criticism (wich I like to receive in my works) some mistakes in the grammar confused me and didn't let some things well explained. That fixed everything else seems to turn really good.
letmeshine letmeshine Oct 08, 2011
@NeverRember thanks sooo much for the comment , its my first time writing so i'm not that good but still i'll try to edit it and thanks again for the input!!!!
NeverRemember NeverRemember Oct 08, 2011
It's good, but maybe just try editing it, put in punctuations, and fix your grammar mistakes. But overall good job!