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Lei Zhu Cui By HeyLookItsJustMe Updated Dec 18, 2016

My Disciple Died Yet Again
  The Revered Master, Yu Yan, known as the number one in the cultivation world, waited for sixteen thousand years, and finally took in a disciple. He taught her carefully, and took care of her diligently.
  He watched her slowly grew stronger as she comprehended the laws, and just as she was about to soar into prominence... she died!
  Hence, he once again took in another disciple, carefully taught her, diligently took care of her, and then... she died again!
  Thus, he took in another disciple, and not long after... she still died!
  Yu Yan: ...
  Disciple: ...
  (Why do I always get picked up by the same person every time I reincarnate? Haaaa... )

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I like reading this but could you please add spaces between the paragraphs so that it won't be one large block and I can also comment on each individual one? Thank you!