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FairyTail: Save Me ~ A NaLu FanFiction!

FairyTail: Save Me ~ A NaLu FanFiction!

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back <3 By bigredsara Completed

It was one peaceful day when Team Natsu decided to go on a job. Lucy was happy to go on the job, but as they get on the train, she gets a feeling something big was going to happen. And something did! She touched a stone to make all her memories go away and turning her into a child! The only way to turn her back is to see someone named Vinder.

Yet what they didn't know is that someone is after Lucy's power, plus the power she has now combined into her. Join the guild and Young Lucy in an adventure, puzzles and shopping? Read my new book: FairyTail: Save Me ~ A NaLu FanFiction!

I'm just saying this..., it would be a lot better if you didn't use 'said' as often. Like replace it with a more descriptive word. It really helps in writing:)
LoupGirl_12 LoupGirl_12 Apr 10
Finally, someone with good dialogue and grammer!  Love your intro.
UnicornKisses333 UnicornKisses333 Sep 02, 2016
@bigredsara how are you, sorry I have to ask on here, my email don't work