The twin angles of sabertooth #Wattys2016

The twin angles of sabertooth #Wattys2016

25.6K Reads 861 Votes 13 Part Story
Christy By Kana12349 Completed

Lucy Heartfilia and Yukino Aurgia, both experience tragedy. Betrayed, heart broken, lost, they run to the forest and find themselves together. They are about to give up when a beautiful white light erupts in front of them, "hello, I am Sapphire, the Angel of gathering. And you are my newest protégés"

(Note: hello, in 2017 January 7th, this story will begin major revisions! Basically I'm rewriting the whole thing. Because it sucked. Bare with me in the first few chapters, in some there aren't even quotations, I'm sorry for the inconvenience)

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princEss040405 princEss040405 Jun 29, 2016
What ever happened to quotation marks? Sorry it is not that I hate the plot and the story in fact it is a good one but I can't follow the conversations due to it not having any quotation marks so please can you add them?
AirPokemon AirPokemon Jan 28, 2016
Nice, And I rlly want to jump in the story and yell, "NATSU IMMA KILL YA NOW!!!!! UNIVERSAL DRAGON'S ROOOAAARR!!!!!!" yep, im the universal dragon slayer, Jade Star. Who are you in Fairy Tail?
Kana12349 Kana12349 Oct 19, 2016
Hello! Anyone who comments on this, I am sincerely sorry for how BAD it is! I'm working on existing now and thank you for your feedback
Alamatrix Alamatrix Jul 01, 2016
Im sorry but what's with spelling angels as angles, or are they supposed to be angles.
DemonOfDeath DemonOfDeath Oct 12, 2016
I'm able to figure out who is speaking in this chapter but it is a bit difficult. The biggest issue is quotation marks. That will make this story go from being a 6 to a 10.
maiahhenry maiahhenry May 08, 2016
I don't like it because I'm confused at where to read and who is talking  maybe you should put them in "lucy"  like this so we know  they are talking