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Sound Of Music

Sound Of Music

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Dee.Are.Dee By AriesVengeance Updated Nov 09, 2010

Meet Marni Bell, a Year 10 music student. She has no basic music knowledge and only has been given an acoustic guitar and within a month she has to perform or she won't be assess through out the semester. At the same time, she met a blue-haired Year 11 music student who will twist thing around in Marni's life...

puppluv puppluv Feb 18, 2011
This was pretty good. I agree with @Seibie, you have quite a few grammar and tense issues, but asides from that, I liked it :) The blue haired boy seems interesting ;P And I hope she gets a playing part in the concert thing. Is Year 10 equivalent with American Junior Year (11th grade)?