The Anatomy of Toni Handcock

The Anatomy of Toni Handcock

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Shelley Iñón By ShelleyIn Updated Sep 21

It's been a long time since the unfortunately-named Toni Handcock ventured outside. She'd far rather stay on the sofa and eat warmed-up soup instead, but she is determined to move on from her old relationship, and even put on a bit of weight!

Everything Toni tries soon turns pear shaped and she is forced to face her past.  Only then will she realize that her future began long, long ago.


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bruchlet bruchlet Aug 22
I started reading the first few chapters, but found the story to lack movement... Just putting it out there so you can take a look and see if there's something you can put in/take out to help the story have more life, more drama, more excitement.
Nice to see you getting ahead. I already know you are a brilliant writer.