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Without You Am Nothing

Without You Am Nothing

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booklover-96 By booklover-96 Updated Feb 19

Meet Hayden

He is an arrogant,heartless womaniser according to the business world but in reality he is the most caring person when it's come to his family and his friends.He rises  fund for orphanage and abused women without revealing his name. He likes to keep it secret.

Meet Angel
 The girl who was once active and energetic and whose smiles lighted the  whole room changed after that horrible incident. Now she is faking herself for the   sake of her family.

What will happen when both meet???  Will he help her to overcome that incident??   Will he able to bring back her true self and happiness??   let's join their love journey to know about more...   

Warning- English is not my first language.. So there will  be  lot of grammar mistakes..

Have a happy reading.

AdrianRhymes AdrianRhymes Oct 28, 2016
Well done:) I must say I loved every bit of give the reader a little action, a little humour. I like that and I will be reading more.
imyourfavorite1 imyourfavorite1 Nov 10, 2016
This must take place in New York. The cab hailing and busy people, it's like they have so many people always walking the streets
DLBiranen DLBiranen Dec 29, 2016
You should erase 'quickly',  because 'hurriedly' and 'quickly' is a repetition when used together
imyourfavorite1 imyourfavorite1 Nov 10, 2016
I'm assuming that you were in the elevator with the person who your going to be interviewed by. Hopefully you get the job Angel lol
SokamNah SokamNah Jan 01
But I like red hair a little bit more than black hair these days xD
SokamNah SokamNah Jan 01
The plot is cliche. Try to add something more new and spicy. Your presentation of events is good. Taste in outfits is good lol. And the grammar is thora okay thora not okay but not bad. Thora improve karne se it can be a fine piece xD