RoomMates

RoomMates

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rebeccaboo03 By rebeccaboo03 Completed

I hear the mumbled voices of people's conversations as I walk into the tall building.
My feet slowly moving to the front desk to get my room key. A woman around her thirties looks up at me and gives me a small smile I quickly smile back and continue to slowly make my way to the front desk taking everything in? Once I get the the lady looks up after finishing up something on her computer "may I get your name hun" she asks politely "yes, hi um I'm Kingsley, kingsley Adams" I said looking at the lady while she looks down and starts to type my name into the computer, she pushes her seat back and the wheels on the bottom of the chair spin her around to a little wall where the keys hang she searches for the room number to go with the key for a few seconds then quickly reaches up to take the key off the hook, she pushes the chair back to her desk and pulls it inwards until she's comfortable and then she looks up at me again "here you go" she said in a sweet tone handing me my key to my room b...

  • bad
  • boy
  • cute
  • girl
  • jerk
  • love
  • romance
  • roommates
Eridna26 Eridna26 Aug 28, 2017
You just met and you're already insulting each other like damn
FvckMe_Up FvckMe_Up Mar 14, 2017
Damn they already calling each other out there names and they just meet
broken_quinny broken_quinny Apr 06, 2017
Carmichael is the name of one of my assistant principals and she super mean!!
mybowDoesntgoinhair mybowDoesntgoinhair Jul 11, 2016
Y is she a brat??? Did he not like the way she talked or something. Damn I'm using up all my data 4 this so this better b good.
RoseBlossom79 RoseBlossom79 Jul 10, 2016
Again, it's a little short, but I like the fact that we got to meet her roommate. You could say why he thought she was a brat, or did she even feel anything towards the guy ... such as being annoyed by his statement ... a few errors but otherwise you are doing fine!
RoseBlossom79 RoseBlossom79 Jul 10, 2016
A little short, but at least I understood the fact that she was getting the room key to her dorm. To make it longer you could tell us more about the college or how she felt.