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The_Deep By Deep4141 Completed

If you ever had a BIG crush on someone and they didn't reciprocate your feelings, you will know what I am talking about ! Read this poem for that someone whom you had/have cherished and longed for !!! ;-))

TheFake34 TheFake34 Jul 20, 2016
I was just crying in the bathroom over a guy. Never again. First love or not hes not going to be in my life anymore.
Khwaish Khwaish Aug 14, 2012
@Deep4141 At least give me a chance to do that! *rolls my eyes* :P
                              So, getting back to your poem! 
                              Ahhh... EXCEPTIONAL! I esp. liked the last two paragraphs.
                              Nice use of words and good flow. 
                              All in all, Something, which really reminded me of my first crush! Ha ha! ;D
Deep4141 Deep4141 May 28, 2012
                              Thanks for checking out the poem ! Appreciate the comment ! ;-)
SkilletRoxMySox SkilletRoxMySox Aug 03, 2011
....this is the first poem i actually liked... i mean, other poems were ohkay but this was the shizz (:
Deep4141 Deep4141 Jun 30, 2011
@akittywithglasses U seem to be fixated on just one thing........I can't do anything about that. But here, the final comment will be mine.
Deep4141 Deep4141 Feb 18, 2011
                              He, I just thought u counted this poem as one of my one shot stories........sorry about that, u don't have to hurry or something......take your own sweet time ! =]