If you ever had a BIG crush on someone and they didn't reciprocate your feelings, you will know what I am talking about ! Read this poem for that someone whom you had/have cherished and longed for !!! ;-))
I was just crying in the bathroom over a guy. Never again. First love or not hes not going to be in my life anymore.
@Deep4141 At least give me a chance to do that! *rolls my eyes* :P
So, getting back to your poem!
Ahhh... EXCEPTIONAL! I esp. liked the last two paragraphs.
Nice use of words and good flow.
All in all, Something, which really reminded me of my first crush! Ha ha! ;D
Thanks for checking out the poem ! Appreciate the comment ! ;-)
....this is the first poem i actually liked... i mean, other poems were ohkay but this was the shizz (:
@akittywithglasses U seem to be fixated on just one thing........I can't do anything about that. But here, the final comment will be mine.
He he......no, I just thought u counted this poem as one of my one shot stories........sorry about that, u don't have to hurry or something......take your own sweet time ! =]