Captured by the Captain (NaLu) [BEING REWRITTEN]

Captured by the Captain (NaLu) [BEING REWRITTEN]

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Demon By demonsheart02 Updated Jul 16

What are Natsu and his fiendish crew up to now?
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Hey! This book will be rewritten. I'm making a whole new book, same tittle and everything and will have re-vamped in the tittle. This was done 2 years ago... I need to re-do it lol

batcat_019 batcat_019 Jun 06
Yasssssssssssss this is like every boy ever now a days lol 😂 thx this is the best thing ever
Sheepishly! Get it! sheep...because she is a ram 😆😆
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I bet she's gonna get kidnapped today 😹😹 yup that's a great thing 😹
its not rapped its wrapped it just sounds weird...just so you know..
I had to look twice bc I thought it said raped a pink towel around me how else did that
nerd_alert2 nerd_alert2 Dec 31, 2016
Okay this is a REALLY  awesome plot and story. But I just wanted to talk to you about somethings that may help you improve your writing. (BOT THAT YOUR WRITING IS BAD OR ANYTHING) it's just if you wanted some advice message me if you like