Broken mate

Broken mate

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Aquamarineblue69 By Aquamarineblue69 Completed

One mysterious girl has a pretty dark past. She shows up in a town oblivious to the secrets it holds. She can't run forever though. Eventually it catches up to you.

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  • broken
  • girl
  • mysterious
  • secrets
  • wattys2017
NiaDarcyPenny NiaDarcyPenny Aug 05, 2016
Maybe start sentences with more variety? 'I' is getting pretty old!
Dandelion_Tomboy Dandelion_Tomboy Dec 02, 2016
18 is underage to drink I recommend in that issue her to be 21
Aquamarineblue69 Aquamarineblue69 Jan 25, 2016
Thx @elephant44 I'll be updating about once a week but I have another book I'm working on to so it depends if inspiration hits me or not. Thx for the compliment.