One mysterious girl has a pretty dark past. She shows up in a town oblivious to the secrets it holds. She can't run forever though. Eventually it catches up to you.
Maybe start sentences with more variety? 'I' is getting pretty old!
18 is underage to drink I recommend in that issue her to be 21
Thx @elephant44 I'll be updating about once a week but I have another book I'm working on to so it depends if inspiration hits me or not. Thx for the compliment.