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Chicago Fire

Chicago Fire

4.7K Reads 48 Votes 13 Part Story
Aubrey Harris By breerocks2436 Updated Mar 18, 2016

Halstead has a sister. Her name is Peyton. She has a son that is 5. His dad is a jackass and left her for Peyton to take care of. Read to find out what happened.

Your story is good but you really need to go back and edit your chapters and fix your spelling and grammar errors. Also have more conversations nota long paragraph of just dialogue