Lamentable Love (MAJOR EDITTING)

Lamentable Love (MAJOR EDITTING)

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SaraAlyammahi By SaraAlyammahi Updated Nov 08

Leina and Sara Carlson are sisters. Leina is dating bad boy in the school, Alexander Colin. Alexander doesn't suspect that things aren't going right, so when he finds out that Leina is cheating on him he is crushed. Sara starts to make her way to his heart but there is a wall between them.
    
    
    Is there someone in the way or is Alexander just unwilling to accept the help? 
    
    
        
        
        
        My First novel......
        
        I hope you guys understand the meaning of this novel it's not just love it's faith and confident.... 
        
        
        Cover made by: @accidity my best friend on wattpad who has always supported me...
        
        I want to thank a special person from my class Sarah for being really supportive and for reading my story always....
        
        
        
        I don't know how this dumb book reached those:-
        
        Highest ranking:-
        
        #badboyinlove: 1
        
        #sweet-romance: 2
        
        #romance-friendship: 1
        
        #badboynextdoor: 4

Haha if I was Sara, I'd continue lying in bed listening to his 'angelic' voice.
You don't need to punctuate your thoughts with ', the italics tell us it's a thought as does the "I thought"
This doesn't need to be in all caps. Just add and exclamation and it will get the point across while also looking neater. :)
- i just started reading an im already loving it <3  thankyou for writing an amazing book