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Lamentable Love (MAJOR EDITTING)

Lamentable Love (MAJOR EDITTING)

17.7K Reads 437 Votes 3 Part Story
Sara Alyammahi By Starry_Nightmare Updated 4 days ago

Leina and Sara Carlson are sisters. Leina is dating bad boy in the school, Alexander Colin. Alexander doesn't suspect that things aren't going right, so when he finds out that Leina is cheating on him he is crushed. Sara starts to make her way to his heart but there is a wall between them.
    Is there someone in the way or is Alexander just unwilling to accept the help? 
        My First novel......
        I hope you guys understand the meaning of this novel it's not just love it's faith and confident.... 
        Cover made by: @reckless-in-paradise 
        I want to thank a special person from my class Sarah for being really supportive and for reading my story always....
        I don't know how this dumb book reached those:-
        Highest ranking:-
        #badboyinlove: 1
        #sweet-romance: 2
        #romance-friendship: 1
        #badboynextdoor: 4

_forest_nymph _forest_nymph Dec 13, 2016
I'm officially in love with this story. Seriously, the characters are great, and Alex is so effing adorable I just wanna give him a huuuugggg!! Keep writing, I wanna see where the plot goes!
mandoysmoysoy mandoysmoysoy Sep 14, 2016
You don't need to punctuate your thoughts with ', the italics tell us it's a thought as does the "I thought"
mandoysmoysoy mandoysmoysoy Sep 14, 2016
This doesn't need to be in all caps. Just add and exclamation and it will get the point across while also looking neater. :)
MaryjoeMiurha MaryjoeMiurha Sep 13, 2016
- i just started reading an im already loving it <3  thankyou for writing an amazing book